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Afraid to put your script under the knife?
A script doctor who gets to the point.​​
Get actionable critique, consultation, or assistance on your script.​​​​​
I’m a Seattle-area screenwriter with experience in the trenches of script critique.​
When other readers ask you all those typical coverage questions about character motives, themes, dramatic questions and hooks, I'm here to help you find the answers.
With me you’ll get clear communication with minimal jargon, actionable suggestions on how to get your script to do what it needs, and guidance to help you recognize and use your script's strengths.
Services
Collaboration, Rewrites & Partnerships
Script Diagnostic
Story Consultation
Think of this as an engine check on the vehicle that is your script. I'll tell you what's missing and where things need work. I'll give you an overall evaluation of what you can do yourself or what I can do to help.
We'll sit down, talk about your script, and I'll help you investigate what makes it tick and what your best options are.
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As part of a story consultation I will also help you find your logline and pitch.
Contact me for a personal consultation if you are looking for a writing partner, collaborator, punch-up, or other intensive writing aid for your script or project. Preference is given to projects based in the Pacific Northwest or greater Sea-Tac region.
Pricing
$0.55/page + $50 for a Script Diagnostic.
$50 for a Story Consultation.
$0.40/page if both together.
Collaborations and rewrites negotiable or best offer depending on project.
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I do not count title pages, cast lists, summaries, etc. in pricing.
Just proper script pages with, y’know, action lines and dialogue on ‘em.
Are You Local to
Seattle?
Check out MUSTER, a free screenwriting group I help run with the Northwest Screenwriter's Guild and Harbor Island Studios.